First of all, this story was so emotionally jam-packed that it had me crying and smiling all at the same time. It was very well-written, and I could feel Max's agony pouring out of him. I'm glad he finally decided to give his love with Ronnie another chance, because he was tearing himself and Craig apart, and it was hard to watch them fall apart at the seams like that. Absolutely lovely. And the moment when Max and Ronnie united again, after all those years apart, was beautiful in every way. You could feel the passion and the emotion, and the scene was so well-written.
I want to see more of these two together. You should write a sequel!
And give Craig a happy ending, because he deserved one.
alright sooo.....this.was.AMAZING!!!!!!! LIKE UNBELIEVABLY AMAZING!!!!
Craig was such a sweetheart....his pain hurts me, as does max's and Ronnie's....=\ it it had ta be there, it was AMAZINGLY well written! And YAY I got a part in the storeh. =D you know me too well, biotch. Seriously, I was all I WOULD SO DO THAT. and then like...yeah, idk if you were tired when you wrote the last couple chappys but max...slipped on his keys? Oh and then later, pulled his phone away from the ignition? LOLOLOL. [for anyone who is wondering, I am her best friend so I'm totally entitled to making fun of her. =D] but nevertheless it was AMAZING. oh and then like, TURKEY BACON IS NOT FAKE. IT'S NUMMY. And don't forget, brybry is gonna hafta get you back because remember, you just scarred him for life. He had to listen to his two best friends having hott makinglove sex in the room just down the hall. -.- poooooorrrrr MoneyMan. Okay well, I absolutely LOVELOVELOVED THIS STORY AND THE CHAPPYS I MISSED WHILE I WAS AWAY!
My favorite part:
Day 1 With Ronnie. <3
ily bestieFIRlifeee <333 you did an amazing job with this.
ohh flying waffles! i loved this! but i feel so bad for craig..he loved max max loved craig too..but max loved...ronnie more... sad...yet happy...ending...kind of... awesome job!