My Immortal - Comments

Update soon!

I love this so far!
UPDATE SOON :)

hi, i like it so far. please write more. tanks

mmmm <3 the whole time, though, i was full thinking - tying it with the real story - that there's no way Des Tiny could've made three kids, but yeah obviously it's not gonna be the whole twisted insaneness of the real thing but yeah i still enjoy this ^^

i would say "poor steve" but because of the real story, i don't like him ==. LOL ><

can't wait for more ~

Really great story

You really weave the whole story together very well and I can't wait for more :)

Can you, um, update faster? I really like this one. Keep it going and take it somewhere good! ==))

please update!!!!!! (:

NICE ! LMAO a Darren Shan fan-fic ! FINALLY !!! :DDDD <3 <3

i must say i absolutely ADORE / AM OBSESSED - well not really - BUT I LOVE DARREN SHAN ! his darren shan saga of 12 books were the most awesome-est vampire saga EVER ! glad i took up however many hours reading them ; so worth it >:D no romance and all action-packed. fuwwwaaaaa one of the best series i've ever read. Now i'm currently reading his Demonata series which are just as EPIC ; i;m up to book 8 ^^

well anway, about YOUR story (hehe sidetracked): yeah,um btw, kinda forgot some characters from darren shan but isn't "Carma Limbs" - as you put - actually 'Cormac Limbs' ? or something like that, or, not even? LOL cause i keep thinking Cormac. but yeah, other than that WOOOOH, i've wondered if someone would every write a story like this for Darren Shan. cause you know the story was so twisted and everything; wonder how you'll incorporate everything ;D

have you read the whole saga ? OMG now i must reminisce and go crazy again cause when i read it, i swear i was on the verge of ripping pages and i literally screamed of frustration sometimes because of how everything was so twisted ad unpredictable >,<

i'd like to see what you can do so *SUBSCRIBE* and hope you do well :D

I like this! Please continue?