Always and Forever - Comments

oh...my god. that last chapter was sweet and HOTT! almost like kettlecorn popcorn. y'know...if u change "hott" to "salty"...

That wasn't dragged on at all, it was a wonderful length and I loved hearing the emotions from both of them in each chapter. I felt myself tingle with happiness when they slowly made their way to confessing their feelings.
If you want any help or something you might want to read it over once more to clean up some spots, yanno, just little spelling/grammar errors, and sentence structure. But really that's the least of my worries.
This story was insanely adorable, good job. <3

This was a really cute short story
and the concept was really cool as well
loved this bunches

You have no idea how much I love this<3333
It's so amazing,
I almost died.
-Giggles Stupidly-
My gosh, I think I've found my winner! :D
xD Lmao.
Maybeeee. We'll seeeeee. ;D
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xo

What an amazing last chapter. That's all I can say.

Noo. I think it is amazing they way it is!
Gosh I loved that soo much. I wish there was more! Ha.
One of the best pieces of writing I have ever seen.
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Once again, i'm incredibly jealous of your characters. :) i love how sweet this story is.

Holy fucking hell. O: Woooo. You left me a dirty mess.

"he prepared himself for what was to come soon." OI, LIT'LLY. xD

MMMMMMMMMM. You're so 'mazing at writing, OBVIOUSLY.
<3

Don't you dare re-write this!
Fuck, that was nice ;D
Now my desk is all dirty, I gotta clean up the jizz before my dad notices!
-squeaks-

Anyways, damn straight I loved this chapter!
XD

Hun, I loved this.
That's all I can say.

NO
don't re-do it xDD

this is AMAZING D;

Woooow. Your stories make me soo happy.
That was amazing, I love it. You are really good at emphasizing the amount of love they truly have for each other.
I wish they were real.
Can't wait for the last chapter.
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My heart swelled reading this. I don't know what it is with your stories and my heart, but daaaaayum. <3

Gaaaawd. I don't see how the next chapter could be any more amazing than the others have been, but hot shit, GIMME.
<3

I love you.
Jinna loves you.
The WORLD loves you.
You're great. XD
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GAH D:
this is the best one yet <3
i swear

Crap I forgot to check my subscriptions to see if you updated this!
But hahahaha you did and now I'm so happy because...
THEY'RE TOGETHER!
-squeals-
I LOVE YOUUUUUUUUU!

Now where's my sex scene? =.=
XD

If you don't win, it'll be a sin. I'm so glad they caved. One thing worse then not bing loved and loving someone is loving someone, and you're too blind to see they love you too.

This is so very good. Excited for next update!

Oh my god. You're definitely going to win this contest. And if you don't, then's that's fuck'd.
But dude.

Now or never. Right. <3
Gaaaaaaawd, this is just 'mazing.

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