I'm a proud reader of this story, and I loved how you ended this...Great Job!!
January 7th, 2011 at 03:16pm
Dirty World - Comments
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That was so so great. I think you are an amazing writer. Like crazy good. I like the end. I'm glad you didn't give it suck a cliche ending like most stories.January 7th, 2011 at 06:49am
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oh my god!!! that blew my mind! my mind is fucking gone!!! loved it, loved it, loved it. I'm freaking ecstatic she chose Brian:p Amazing work:))January 7th, 2011 at 04:33am
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It's over? :(
I loved, really I did. It was amazing, you're such a talented writer! :)January 7th, 2011 at 03:46am -
It's over? :(
I loved, really I did. It was amazing, you're such a talented write! :)January 7th, 2011 at 03:46am -
Wow, during the first half of the story it was all about the suspense & mystery behind why Brian was a creeper. But then the turn around- totally unexpected! You darling, are an awesome writer! I sincerely hope you keep writing to your hearts fullest content- this talent of yours could take you far :)
Very enjoyable story, can't wait to see more of your work!
<3 MeganJanuary 7th, 2011 at 03:28am -
I actually loved how it turned out! at first i was like great she pretty mych did enieee miniee mineee moe but when it all came together with the title it was like a slap in the face. The ending has beening staring at us the whole time, we were just too blind to see, I really loved how the story played out!January 7th, 2011 at 01:54am
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Sorry for posting the same thing three times!!January 7th, 2011 at 01:43am
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Sorry for the long comment i just really loved your story o_oJanuary 7th, 2011 at 01:43am
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Sorry for the long comment i just really loved your story o_oJanuary 7th, 2011 at 01:43am
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Sorry for the long comment i just really loved your story o_oJanuary 7th, 2011 at 01:43am
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This may sound a little.... out there , but im actually quite serious ! You should get this published !! I BET THE PUBLISHERS WOULD DO IT !!! Just you know , change the names of the people and mix the plot a little bit so avenged sevenfold is in it[: I'll be looking forward to that new Johnny story ;] This story was one of the greatest stories (published & unpublished) i have ever read, hands down. Im gonna check out you other stories because you just don't know how GREATLY FANTASTIC a writer you are. You may think your a good writer , your not. YOUR HELL A BETTER THAN YOU THINK !!! Your an amazing writer , way better than I'll ever be. You inspire me !! Please please please write more. I'm staying subscribed to this story foREVer :DDDJanuary 7th, 2011 at 01:42am
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*squeal* I freakin loved it!!January 7th, 2011 at 01:31am
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loved the endingJanuary 7th, 2011 at 12:36am
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loved it.
awesome ending.
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I think it's pretty cool how she ended up being with the villain. =D But it probably really sucks to be Johnny.. >_> I'm glad I stuck to the very end. Awesome story!!!!! =DJanuary 6th, 2011 at 11:50pm
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I'm sad it ended :( Let me tell you, even though I consciously had no idea who I wanted her to choose, apparently subconsciously I wanted her to end up with Johnny. That's who I would've gone with. But oh well. You definitely switched up a typical ending, not that this story is typical. I've loved this story since before the beginning and I'll always love it. Bravo on such an amazing story.January 6th, 2011 at 10:54pm
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oh and i'm also happy that she stayed with Brian. i'm glad she chose him!January 6th, 2011 at 10:34pm
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NOOO, I CANNOT BELIEVE IT FINISHED. BUT I HAVE TO DAY THAT YOU DID A GREAT FUCKING JOB!!!! I LOVED IT. <333333January 6th, 2011 at 10:34pm
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You know, I'm actually very happy that she ended up with Brian. :D I loved the epilogue.<3January 6th, 2011 at 09:50pm
