That was so so great. I think you are an amazing writer. Like crazy good. I like the end. I'm glad you didn't give it suck a cliche ending like most stories.
Wow, during the first half of the story it was all about the suspense & mystery behind why Brian was a creeper. But then the turn around- totally unexpected! You darling, are an awesome writer! I sincerely hope you keep writing to your hearts fullest content- this talent of yours could take you far :) Very enjoyable story, can't wait to see more of your work! <3 Megan
I actually loved how it turned out! at first i was like great she pretty mych did enieee miniee mineee moe but when it all came together with the title it was like a slap in the face. The ending has beening staring at us the whole time, we were just too blind to see, I really loved how the story played out!
This may sound a little.... out there , but im actually quite serious ! You should get this published !! I BET THE PUBLISHERS WOULD DO IT !!! Just you know , change the names of the people and mix the plot a little bit so avenged sevenfold is in it[: I'll be looking forward to that new Johnny story ;] This story was one of the greatest stories (published & unpublished) i have ever read, hands down. Im gonna check out you other stories because you just don't know how GREATLY FANTASTIC a writer you are. You may think your a good writer , your not. YOUR HELL A BETTER THAN YOU THINK !!! Your an amazing writer , way better than I'll ever be. You inspire me !! Please please please write more. I'm staying subscribed to this story foREVer :DDD
I think it's pretty cool how she ended up being with the villain. =D But it probably really sucks to be Johnny.. >_> I'm glad I stuck to the very end. Awesome story!!!!! =D
I'm sad it ended :( Let me tell you, even though I consciously had no idea who I wanted her to choose, apparently subconsciously I wanted her to end up with Johnny. That's who I would've gone with. But oh well. You definitely switched up a typical ending, not that this story is typical. I've loved this story since before the beginning and I'll always love it. Bravo on such an amazing story.