The Unwanted Marriage - Comments

LOVE THE CHAPTER

Update soon!

I forgive you! *random hug* I thought you quit for a second there. I'm glad you're just busy. This is good; you're making less and less mistakes.

this is such a good story!
plz update soon.

Yay! you updated! So good still. What happened? you dassapeared for a while. school?

this is actually pretty interstting! plz update constantly!!

i love the splash scene. and with siwon's thoughts i think that he will stay with hamei(sp)(im talking about the girl).

no problem! i will always comment if that will get me updated chapters! ur story is so coll that im writing or drafting a story very similar to this one. and u make me feel special! :-)

yay! I'm so glad I'm helping you edit! People read it more now. LOLZ, they're living together?! I wonder how that'll work out.

u must'n think negative about the story. it has just the right amount of mysteriousness (if thats even a word) and how gulliable the people are. if i make sense...

Oh my, I have this terrible habit of just reading the story excitedly and ignoring the author's note at the end. Whoops. Um, to answer your question, well, it was confusing at first. The beginning of the story had many grammatical errors and confused me a lot. But as you went on, your writing grew better and better. The events flow smoothly, and the story is very coherent. I love how you have a balance of plot-filled chapters and "filler" chapters, like this one. Keep writing. This story brings a smile to my face. :)

love the new chapter!!! all of this behind the scenes are funny

wait... what? I don't understand what you meant on your author's note. If you want, you can make me co- writer and i'll edit the spelling for you. I promise I wont delete your stuff. You don't have to though. Bye. (Let me know if you want to, before you make me co-writer; i have to check something before-hand. Only if YOU want to.)

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the newest chapter is ThE funniest besides the pregnant one. omj u MUST to update!!!!!!!!

nooooooooooo!!!! You can't get suspended! Why did you get reported?! Tell me; maybe I can help you. This was getting too good to be stopped; I wouldn't want to start over either.

ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh! Stalking. Very very nice.

ur dang right it's a late update! LOL i'm kidding. This is getting gooooooood. Ba da ba ba ba... i'm lovin it. Lol i couldn't help myself :P :)

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post more; i'm shaking in anticipation here. I hate waiting like this! LOL

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i love your story! please don't stop. i totally was not expecting how they were going to get married. that was cool. update!!! (srry for not commenting earlier it was because i like to comment once i'm done and i started it yesterday)

oh ok then. my bad. You scared me for a minute there.

P.S You know you could just tell me in a profile comment... but oh well. L8ter!