Square One - Comments

Nice and refreshing indeed :D
My only problem is the ....what would you call it? I guess the structure of everything written out. ' instead of " and some other random things that aren't used anymore or the like. Just a little problem that distracted me a few times.
But otherwise, that was really good. The characters were extremely believable and I always felt like I was a part of everything, and I really hope she can really grow into who she should be, happy and confident. Thanks!

This is gooddd! Don't see too many stories like this around mibba. It's refreshing to read new things like this.[:

Thanks for entering this to my Lovely Pre-Writes contest. I'll let you know when I'm done judging and winners have been announced.!<3

saw that you checked out my story so I decided to check out yours. It's really good, I like it!!! Hope you add more!!!! Subscribing!!!=D

that was really good! kitty kinda annoys me a bit cause she dosen't say anything that she thinks!!!! cool story though! will u do any more or add to it?

Me too.. I really like it :)
I shall subscribe also x)

I really like it so far (: *subscribes* ahah.