Sacrifice - Comments

I love the ending. Im glad Mordecai got to come back. =)

*bouncing up and down* somone else commented!! whoot! Im happy!!! Anyway I think Mordecai's choice is very noble. I can't wait to see what y end up doing, cuz im sure u have a surprise for us.

I do believe you've told us just how much pain she was going through lol When using her powers try and see if you can describe it a bit more in detail. Just saying it she concentrated on putting pressure on his windpipe makes it sound like she's using the Force lol I'm sure their is more to it. I can almost see that. ^_^

Well I must say that Smurf is indeed a faithful subscriber lol I enjoyed your story as always. ^_^ Though, please do take into account that sometimes you have to throw in a paragraph for description of scenery so that way readers know what's around the characters. You put ceilings and such but I couldn't put a good mental image of Mordecai's home. Other than that, I do enjoy Ariella's sassy attitude. Keep that up. I hope your cat is doing fine as well. I'm sure with a master as yourself, your cat will be getting much better. ^_^

Aww thank u for the mention, u didn't have to do that.

This is sooo awesome! I can't wait to see how they pull this whole thing off.

sweetness! Love the powers thing, i can't wait to see what happens. =) And i loved how cool Hunter was about the whole deal. hahaha.

sry to hear about ur cat. Hope everything will be ok for the old guy. and you know my answer on wither to put up another or not. lol =)

Darn right im excited! Im always excited about a new story. lol

Whoot! I loved it. Anyway I think the name of the new story sound interesting. Just as long as u dont' get wraped up in that one and forget about this one. =) i've done that so i make sure i tell people that.

=) u like the name Hunter don't u? U called Mordecai, Hunter agian at the end of the chap. lol. other then that it's awsome.

=) love it. Once agian u need to go over and fix a few misspellings. Im sure though that's because u were up so late. lol

u made few spelling mistakes at the begginging and u also called Mordecai, Hunter at the very begginging part. Other then those things it was cool.