I don't know how many times I've read this; it's probably a lot. Regardless, I keep coming back to this 'cause it's such a lovely sweet story, with a genuine heartfelt charm to it. I feel guilty for not offering you a ridiculously long review about the language & whatnot, it's just this is how this story makes me feel: nostalgic, like butter melting over a sweet teacake. It's a happy story & I adore you for writing it. Therefore thank you.
I noticed it! I'm that sharp. :P. It wasn't as action packed as a normal one shot, which means..... You have to write more!! x] It's an interesting beginning to what can be an interesting story. I anticipate more [if they are coming] Quick note, I imaged they were in Glasgow for some odd reason. :)
From the first chapter of this story im already in love with it! i love the way you write and the story has a good plot i cant wait to read more of it ^_^