i didn't really get what the line "I loved you first" meant in the song but after reading this I feel as if it makes sense now. :) It's an AWESOME short story.
Awe. I loved this, Alaska. It was beautiful and amazing! I could imagine what Audrey felt - the hurt and pain. What really got to me was the "I loved you first" line. Something about it, just hit! Lol. I really loved this, dude! (: