My Sweetest Downfall - Comments

  • Mikakoo

    Mikakoo (100)

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    i didn't really get what the line "I loved you first" meant in the song but after reading this I feel as if it makes sense now. :) It's an AWESOME short story.
    February 13th, 2012 at 02:34am
  • StolenSerenade

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    I love this song. And this story.
    April 29th, 2010 at 07:02pm
  • la dispute.

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    Awe. I loved this, Alaska. It was beautiful and amazing!
    I could imagine what Audrey felt - the hurt and pain.
    What really got to me was the "I loved you first" line. Something about it, just hit! Lol.
    I really loved this, dude! (:
    April 27th, 2010 at 05:37am