Scarlett Red - Comments

thanks jazzzzzz :D
it means alot! and yes, i made up all the charactersss, i think.
i will put my own twist on it, of course (:
your stories are great thankyouuuuuuu. very good.
Love youuuu.
x x x

Omg imy its amazing I love it :):):)
I can tell its gonna be a story I keep reading :)
Did you make up the character or base her on someone you know?
Only advice I'll give is put your own twist on it. Dont stick to the cliche girl falls for girl story :)
Add your own flair and everyone will love it :):)
You dont have to take my advice my stories arent that great lol.
Your amazing and so are your stories. Your gonna out-do me D=

Love you imy xxx

seems like an interesting story. could you make the descriptions just a teeny bit longer.
keep updating and keep up the good work ! :D

This is basically the introduction to Scarlett, and her life. Hope you guys enjoy. Let me know if I need to change something or just offer some basic advice :)
Thankyou! :D