Of Moons, Birds, and Monsters - Comments

This is really adorable :D <3

Amazing as always. <3
ALFKJDALKF;JDASKFL;DJ I JUST NOTICED LUKE COMMENTED ON YOUR PHOTO ON FB. DAFJLKDSA;FJDSKAL;JFKLDAS;JFLKADS;JFKL;DASJFDKL;ADSJFKLDAS;JFKL;ASDF. Keir commented on mine. I feel complete now. <3
Anyways, I won't bore you with more keysmash. I'm glad she asked about Jack, and I'm positive that something else will come up. And I love that Luke's willing to help her. :D
Update soon!

This is a really interesting story. It's got a great idea to it! Rily's a babysitter for the Mitrani family, and falls for one of the kids? Right..Right?! Haha.

I really want to know more about Rily. I know in due time we'll learn more about her. But I have so many questions. Why is she living with a roommate? She dropped out of school, cause she couldn't pay the bills..Where is her parents, family? God, Rily seems a lot like me. I pretty much have the same life, but I don't babysit. I can't stand kids, thats probley the only different I know between me and Rily.

I'm thinking that maybe theirs some problems in the house. We know that they don't have much money, but I'm also thinking about something going on between the parents, thats just a guess though.. Mrs.Mitrani..I just want to beat her up! Not paying Rily her money. Why does Rily even still work for her? She should be looking for another job, she could get so much better. Atleast you'd get yer money on time...Which brings me to Luke paying Rily. I knew it that was gotta happen! I was like yup! Though now I'm wondering what the money was for? Was it to leave, get out from the house? Was he saving up for his own place, or just something in genreal? Where'd he get the money if he doesn't even work?

Next chapter should be interesting. Rily and Luke home together. They went to school together right? So they know each other, but not well enough. So this give them time to talk to each other. Though that takes time when its with two very shy like people..I know, haha.

Is Mrs. Mitrani going to give Rily her money anytime soon? Well we know soon about Rily? What is Jack problem? Is he just a douche? Where does he work by the way? Why doesn't Luke? Is Luke even selling drugs? Does Rily leave for another job? Does she get fired? Does Mrs. Mitrani care/find out that Luke stayed home? lshgksjdfghds,fgdfg

I love this! It's so good and I cant wait to see what happens with these two! post more soon!

hey i really like your story so far :)
i cant wait for more
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if you want, can you check out my Kevin Pearce stoy?

loved the update! I cant wait for more!

Loved it, but you already knew that. :)
Luke is such a cutie. I can totally picture him chillin' in bed, his hair all over the place. :D
Update soon. And by soon, I mean now.

Aww, Luke. <3 He's such a nice guy.
Adorable so far, I love the dynamic with the sisters.
Suggestions... maybe have the Riley/Jack dynamic displayed a little more?
Loved it!

I like this so far, update soon!

i love it so far i cant wait for more!

awwwwwwwwwww, i think that was the best first chapter i've ever read! XD
loving it so far, and luke (of course), and mgmt songs for story titles! i am an mgmt freak, i saw them at coachella and that very same weekend i saw jack mitrani walking around the festival with his camera. *_* of course i didn't catch a glimpse of luke. lol
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not for me, for more I ment Cx sorrry hahah.

You made my day.
I've been waiting for another Luke story.
I caaan't wait for me, seems like an interesting read!
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