A Touch Too Much - Comments

This is really good, only let down for me was the overexaggerated British accents- it's probably just me, though. It's a pet peeve of mine, so I can't help but say something. Ignore me, I'm sorry c:

Omg I loved that so fucking much. Tom is presh.

WHY THE HECK ISN'T THIS A CHAPTERED STORY!? And why aren't I subscribed?!
Bloody hell that was the sexiest thing I've read in months! Sexiest pairing too :3
Brill job you did here, love. My only dislike was the fact it ended! I think I'll go read some of your other stories, if they're as great as this I think I may just die of the awesomeness... That is all x]

Hehe this was beyond awesome, loved it :D

Amazing, as is everything you write.

LIKE. I was surprised to see them paired, but it was good, not what I expected.

I want moreeeee.

This was cuteeee.

This made me smile.
Amazing<3 Lol.

Fucking. Genius.
You tricked me!
You knew I was a pervert when it came to stuff like this. >:D
Lmao.
Not that I'm complaining or anything.
Anyways.
Ohmygosh. Gaskarth + Oli Sykes = The sex<333
I really loved this oneshot,
it was ah-mazingggg<33333
Oh, and I agree with ^.
Any chance of making it into a story? >:D
Lmao.
Fantastic<333333
xo

Oh, wow, this is amazing!!! Any chance of it becoming a chaptered story? This is an AMAZING pairing and I seriously want more!!! =D

<3

i liked it a lot!
toms a cutieee ;)