I only took a look at the summary and first chapter- it would be a good idea 1. to fix the summary and spell "betrayal" correctly and 2. to break the first chapter into paragraphs
Aww... how lovely! I love how Seth and Lidia -or is it Livia- got back together. Happiness fills my heart. I always like good ending chapters. :D Great Update!
Aww... how lovely! I love how Seth and Lidia -or is it Livia- got back together. Happiness fills my heart. I always like good ending chapters. :D Great Update!
awesome update! Slight tears in my eyes. I hope Livia understands... Seth is hoping for Livia to protect the girls -Emily, Claire, and Kim- when the new borns come, right? Uh... I'm glad I helped you out of your writers block... :) Love your story!
wow! It's really awesome! I like how your character plot is original. Turning into a panther... that is so cool! I'm happy for Seth and Livia... I wish Charlotte would stop hating Livia. And... Lily is another interesting character. I love how you piece up your story. :)