Okay, I have had a recent Donny Donowitz obssession, and you have made my day!!! Thank you so much for writing this, and excellent job! I wish it were longer so it wouldn't have ended so soon!
lovely story! loved the ending and epilogue:) as for the leading mad i don't really know. Donny is my favorite, I would have to say make the leading man Donny. But I don't mind Hugo or Aldo at all. But I don't like Fredrick.
The epilogue was a masterpiece. It warmed my heart, truly. And thanks for thanks us for commenting, that was something I wasn't expecting. But, all in all, it was a beautiful story. I love the way you write. I feel like you should just do a string of Basterd stories. First, with Donny, and then just go through the list of delicious men that were in that film :]
Ack! Don't make it about that jerk off! Donny or Stiglitz! Donny or Stiglitz! pleeeeease (: btw, loved this ending. It was great and closed the story in a very happy ending. And it was adorable. That's important too :D Tell me when you make your new Basterds story, okay?
The last real chapter made me smile, especially since they died in each other's arms (: The epilogue was beauuutiful! I'm glad Lorelei recieved what she'd wanted in the end, with no father to ruin it for her, to take away the only person who she really loved.
Anyway, I'm very glad you're doing another Basterd story. Honestly, you write it fabulously and flawlessly and I'm already excited to read it. As for the leading man, I'd rather Donny, but if not, my next choice would be Hugo and his mysterious ways.
Although, I wish Donny heroically ripped off the bombs on both of their legs and they rushed out of there and lived happily ever after--I feel like this ended as it should have even if it was tragic. I'm sad to see Donny and Lorelei go.
I think you should continue writing Basterd stories because you do it fabulously.
I must say, coming back from a horrid day of school to find THREE chapters was pretty amazing. I really like how you stayed with the movie, even if it meant killing off who was killed in the movie.
The Lorelei and Fredrick was simply adorable, while it lasted =D But so far, my favorite pairing was her and Donny, because they were assholes to eachother.
ANYWAY. While it's sad this story is almost over, I can't expect you to miraculously continue with the given ending of the movie.
Ugh, the end of this movie sucked D: first Stiglitz and Wicki die, and then Donny and Omar ): And, Lorelei died too D: oh well, it's still and epic story. I love how all of the characters are so well written.
I'm so glad your finished with that horrid project and can start updating again. I enjoyed the two updates today. I read one before work and one when I got home, it made my day. Keep up the awesome writing, and I can't wait until the next one!
(Don't feel bad about not updating, its your story.)
Ahahahaha Fredrick. He acts so innocent (I'm not sure innocent is a good work for him, but he just seems that way to me...maybe childish would work better? I dunno.) for a Nazi, and I love him for it.
It's very depressing that Hugo is that old ): He's pretty much my dad's age, which is reaaaally gross haha.
OH MY GOSH, dude you totally are like in sync with me. Just today I was watching Inglorious Basterds again with my mum, and I was like hugo is my favorite character but i can't believe he is 47 he looks fantastic for a near 50 year old. I was feeling pretty gross about liking someone that's like my grandpa's age. But really its like dammmmn what do you be drinking to stay that hot, I personally think he's one of those people that as grow older they get better looking. But yeah this chapter was a nice little flashback one. Oh yeah and my favorite quotes are- Donny: " Fuck a duck!"
Hugo: "Say "auf Wiedersehen" to your Nazi balls."
Donny: "Teddy fuckin' Williams knocks it out of the park! Fenway Park on its feet for Teddy! Fuckin' ballgame! He went yardo on that one, on to fuckin' Lansdowne Street!"
I love the hostility, and for the romance aspect. I don't care if it takes until the last chapter. Just make the sexual frustration/tension as agonizing and hilarious as you can. A romance will all three (Aldo, Donny, and Stigs) would be amazing. But then again we don't want to make the main character a ho. lol, keep on writing!