Two is Better Than One - Comments

I LOVE THIS! I LOVE THIS! I LOVE THIS!

I hope Jordan keeps this promise of kickinh his ass one at a time!
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fig9uhsgjefkaoijfhubnjwmkjhygtfrdesxxtdcfvghbnjmk i want him <.<

Twins! Love it! Let Steve come in and they can take turns kicking his ass.

I loved this chapter until Steven's name was said. I think that the boys will handle him well. Twins girls is a change. I mean it breaks the boy dominance in the Staal family though.

Aw twin girls...so sweet!
Can't wait to see what happens with Steven...all those hockey players can handle him!

I was all smiles during that chapter until Steven's name was uttered.

you need to up date now! steven neeeds to go tohell

Fuck. He couldn't just leave them alone.

Twin girls how exciting :D and her mom is having a boy :D the girls are definitely going to spoiled :D
oh shit! Steve ahhh :S
Update Soon :D

Awesome story, just finished 29 chappies hahahaha. I really do think taking a few extra minutes to edit or run each chapter through a spell checker is worth it. There is some awesome content in here that gets washed out by grammatical errors.

Not really stoked for her being prego, but the story does need to go somewhere eventually. If you're stuck, worry not, it happens to the best of us! I like that there is more than one author in this project. It keeps the ideas fresh while keeping the characters consistent...or full of surprises.

Write soon!!! Can't wait to see what you have :)

basically addicted. I love this story! I love Jordan's personality and how welcoming the Staals were :') Especially Parker and Jared.

This is just awesomeee!! ((:

That is just crazy that they are deciding to go through this together. That is just amazing on both of their parts.

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THAT WAS FUCKING AMAZING UPDATE RIGHT NOW!

Am I the last person to this party? This story is crazy good. I just read it all non-stop and I want more now please!

I'm relieved to see that Jordan turned his attitude around.

Glad Jordan decided to wake up and be a man!
Looking forward to more!

You had me worried for a minute... I thought my good thing idea had gone out the window :P

i was so worried jordan wasn't going to come around...
and i am not looking forward to the trip to california......

AWWWW!!! he talked to her and they worked it out :D
Update Soon:D
Love it :D :D