Scream - Comments

@ OctoberA7X
thanks! I appreciate it :D

@ NikkiFoxy8
I'll try :)

I'm scared for her but I'm excited at the same time...this a very confusing feeling lol love this! Update soon :)

Please update again soon!

So Matt has finally arrived!
I wonder what he wants with her, he probably had her stalked and watch her every move.
I am dying to find out why she has been kidnapped and Matt tells her that she has to obey demand he says.
David finally listened to his voice messages, I wonder if the police will do anything.
Because it seems that Matt is very powerful!
I am dying for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I really like it so far. Janie and David are so cute together they are like made for each other. I can't wait for Matt to come into the story and I'm betting he is the one in the Escalade watching her. Please update very soon!

I like this so far

I love this story!
So Janie is now engaged to David and she has someone following her around?
And I bet she is going to be apart of those missing girls around Orange County.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I like where this is going, however, you need to seperate the paragraphs more. It's hard to read right now. Good plot, though. I've subscribed.