There is obviously another reason why it's not Stephen.....y'know, it was supposed to be Stephen all along. Good thing I told you who was who (; Also, I'VE BEEN WAITING FOR THE (secret)CONCERT FOR THREE CHAPTERS NOW. WHERE IS IT? IT BETTER BE IN THE NEXT CHAPTER!
Hmmmm. I'm not quite sure Brian was trying to kiss her there. I'll have to wait to judge, like you said. It sucks that Chelsea is so nice in this story. Ugh. I still love this, though :D
awesomeee (; Didn't imagine that kind of introduction, but, at least it's an introduction. Seems like things are about to get quiteeee trickyy! Poor girl can't catch a break!
I don't think it's cliche/predictable, you always keep a good twist going :)