Can I please gut Mr. Devoirs like the pig that he is? Then toss him to the sharks. I think that would be a fitting end for him. I hope Acker's parents don't flip out or something when they find out. Hope to find out soon! <3
i was wondering if you were ever going to come back lol i love this chapter. really long too :) but, didn't it, somewhere in the beginning of the story, say that acker was from north carolina? anywho, update soon! -er.
Mr. Devoirs is like, mentally unbalanced. He must be in order to treat an intelligent person that way, even if he suspects that they have a tail.
Morgan acts a little young to be 16 centuries. He must have had SOME kind of life experience in that time. I don't mind it, I'm just saying, in case you wanted to know the impression he makes. He's also cute and likable, just seems naive for his age.
Good job continuing the story. I like what you're doing with it.
Yay, now I get to read two versions of this story! I hope Amy's finding out doesn't turn out to be a bad thing. Judging from what she said earlier I don't think it will be. Hope to find out soon! <3
ohnoes! SEAFOOD! seafood is bad. :( i'm glad someone took over this story. i really liked it and was pretty sad when i found out she wasnt gonna write it anymore. anyway, UPDATE SOON!