Benji - Comments

This is so adorable! :3
I loved the
"I couldn't help but smile; that kid's happiness was contagious."
Can't wait for the next update!

awwwwwwww this was really sweet, I loved it

oh my gosh, benji is so effin adorable!
“They’re my friends! No, don’t close the door!”
i found that really funny; i don't know why.
i think it was the No, don't close the door! part that really made me crack up; 'cause i can picture him (in my head) preventing Carl from closing the door. and it's a funny image XD

anyhoes, i like this. *subscribes*
update soon, yeah? :D
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really good, I like it

Wow...the characters are AWESOME!!
specialy Reid:)
Please update even sooner:)

Aw, so incredibly sweet.
I love Benji and Reid!

UPDATE = D

awh. i love your prologue. short, simple, sweet. [:
and love your last sentence, too. it's hinting at what your character's thinking, without narrating it, which is really good. [x

anyway, i'm subscribing to this. ^-^

Wow...i like it:)
I hope an update is soon