Love against law - Comments

this was definitely worth staying up late into the night to read. ^^
I loved the whole concept and all of it in general, despite minour errors found; eh, everyone makes mistakes, and no one is perfect. ;]
i really enjoyed this, and it ended better than i was expecting. if you don't continue to write, i will personally hunt you down and enslave you. ^^ heehee...

cool story ^-^
I am subscribin and commentin cuz it deserves a comment, even a munted one such as this