i absolutely loved this story cant wait to read another one by you guys and check out the ones u suggested hope you overcame obstacles and had a good day like i did:)
Hey! Oh wow, this is actually a story that you co-write that I have finished reading finally! And I must say, I'm really excited to read your other stuff, haha xD
Woah, woah, you can't end it there. Ending are supposed to wrap up the story, the plot line that you started with his dad isn't a bomb you can just drop and leave. I like the ending except for that, if you're not going have a sequel you shouldn't have added that.
Ok, so i haven't been able to stop reading this story I love it buttt...
I don't understand the "It's only a matter of time" thing :S
Also i was kind of like what the frig at the sex scene. Its plausible that Nolan likes it rough, but he just penetrated him? After being abused by his father he should be releuctant to touch etc.. and You certainly don't just ram your prick up someones ass, theres a finesse and method needed, like deflowering a virgin. And if Nolan wasn't a virgin, which i dont think he was, the time should have been special
I love the story heaps but I feel a little let down on the sex scene :/