Time Runs Through Our Veins. - Comments

  • Sarcastically Blunt

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    I must say, this story is simply heart warming and super cute. Its stories like these that make my day and show that love is the key to everything. It is well structured, exquisite wording, good choice of band references and song usage, and so much more. Keep up the awesome work.
    January 9th, 2011 at 05:45pm
  • JellyPiner

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    Okay..like i said before, Nolan's PoV is almost the exact same thing as the chap before. You have to skip then entire chapter almost just to get to something new. The story is good and cute, i just dont like how there are two chapters of the same thing.... also (sorry if im like putting u down soo much) but that last chapter was too cheesy for me. the kissing and 'i love you' part. it was sweet with the singing and gutiar but idk i think its too fast for the I LOVE YOU... I really do like the story tho XD I just say it how i think it. :3
    December 22nd, 2010 at 11:39pm
  • HottestWolfGoddess16

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    This story is awsome so far, keep writing! lolz! :)
    December 8th, 2010 at 01:14am
  • words as weapons

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    I love this please write me more hun
    December 5th, 2010 at 09:06am
  • JellyPiner

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    I love the story. please write more. i just dont like how you guy pretty much repeat eachother. one chap something would happen, then next chap the same thing just from nolan's POV...but nothing new happens...its good tho :) keep writing!
    November 28th, 2010 at 07:49am
  • words as weapons

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    I like this write more soon kay
    November 19th, 2010 at 04:56am
  • The Girl Who Waited

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    I love this story :D But um you kind of posted the latest chapter 3x... :D Write more really soon please?
    October 30th, 2010 at 11:50pm
  • In.The.Shadows

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    YAY!
    love it (lik usual!)
    i LOVE how Rylan cares so much bout Jordan...Sibling love =]
    <3
    June 17th, 2010 at 01:13am
  • Ginestra;

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    Aww poor Nolan.
    I love this story already.
    It's awesome and Nolan is sexy! :D
    June 14th, 2010 at 10:57am
  • sharkbait.

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    Loved the update! Nolan is so damn hot. I'm really liking this story now. :D
    June 14th, 2010 at 10:43am
  • Miyral

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    I like this so far. Wonder what's going to happen at the house. Hope to find out soon! <3
    May 5th, 2010 at 03:31am
  • sharkbait.

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    Oh wow. This art project sounds super interesting. You guys have a great and original plot.

    Keep up the amazing work guys!
    May 2nd, 2010 at 05:22am
  • sharkbait.

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    Yay! Victory is mine once again! First comment. :D

    This story has mad potential, believe it or not. You both have a great writing style and I can't wait until the next chapter.

    The boys seem cute, are you going to post any pictures?

    P.S. I loved the Glee reference. I feel the same way. Just watching it once had me hooked. XD
    May 1st, 2010 at 08:09am