Falling to Pieces - Comments

Love love love the update :) If Jonny doesn't tell her he loves her soon, I'ma come in the story and tell her myself for him!!!!!!! Hahah :) Love it ;) :D:P

Ahhhh, that is like the sweetest gift ever.
Sentimental & perfect.
I'd be legit impressed with him.
Oh & words of wisdom from TJ Oshie?
I don't think so.
More soon. <3

but as Jonathan wrapped his arm tighter around Stella’s shoulders allowing her to snuggle closer into his side, this was exactly where she wanted to be.
awww!!! they are just too freaking adorable

Stella grinned as she quickly tore off the wrapping paper to reveal the familiar turquoise box.
ohhh how i love that turquoise box!!!!!!!!

“You had told me once that Stella was Latin for star.”
okay. i love it that he remembered this! what a thoughtful guy!

ahhhhh just tell her jonny!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and stop listening to tj. the guy is not boyfriend material. hes the last one to be taking any sort of advice from.

i reeeeally hope he just up and tells her. it think its really cute that jonathan is jealous.clearly he;s crazy about stella and he should let her know before theyre apart again.

ohhh kate. you know how much i love this story.
please, please, pleaseee dont make me wait too long for another update <3

Jon should totally tell her. That would be soo cute...LOL

I just read this and I must say this is way awesome =] More soon?

I think Jonny should just tell her. But that's just me.
Can't wait for more. Great work!!

Okay. So this is insanely cute and adorable ;) I love it ;) :) :) :D:D:D:P:P:P

Love it. Great update honey

Lovelovelove.
She seems to get along with his family, but then again who wouldn't.
Her family just sucks.
More soon. <3

I love this story! I cant wait to see what happens!

ohh i like it so far. very cute!

that was so cute!! I love it!!
Update again soon?

jon and davey are so cute!!!
i love that stella went to visit his family... and that she and jonny boy are staying in the same room. do i sense a bedroom scene coming soon?

i loved it! i cant wait for more

Amazing story so far!! I love it!!
I hope you update soon!!

Aww...Love it

You updated!
I missed this.
I think him calling her is pretty freakin' adorable.
More soon. <3

“I didn’t? He’s kind of annoying, but I guess all younger brothers are.
i can totally see david toews being extremely annoying.

“What? A guy can’t just call a girl just to see how she’s doing?”
negative. they always have alterior motives. alllllways.

“Is it, uh… too early to say that I miss you?”
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!
aww! no jon. it's definitely not too early.

kate! this was so good. i love this story way too much.
i wish stella wasnt going to boston. she should go to und instead ;)
cant wait to see what happens.
more soooooon?! pleeeease.

ps. i wasnt happy with my mike update. so im redoing it.
you can expect that tomorrow.

anyways. i loved this. i love you. now maybe start on your t.hall story? it's not like ive been waiting long or anything :P nbd.

This story is cute! I really like it. Hope you can update again very soon!!

EEEEK! I wanna read your favourite chapter, so post it soon!!!

LOVED IT!
This "I Miss You" Part was sooo sweet!