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  • maddizzlle

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    love it! keep it going! :)
    September 8th, 2011 at 06:43am
  • deanna13

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    im really loving your story please update soon:)
    April 30th, 2011 at 09:01am
  • SumnerinWonderland

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    I love it:D I can't wait for more
    April 21st, 2011 at 07:17pm
  • forever.--

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    aww i like this :)
    i wonder what John's got up his sleeve....:o
    post soon!
    April 21st, 2011 at 08:26am
  • unlove

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    I don't think I remember much from the original version, but whatever, I love this story!
    April 19th, 2011 at 10:50am
  • Sylvester_th

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    Love it! I can't wait until you update so I read more of the John/Harlow/Thatcher saga.
    April 18th, 2011 at 06:26am
  • the epic blonde

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    I love this story<3 It's so amazing! I love how you make the characters real and very... permanent. I liked the add in of Casey, who is totally horrible and makes John seem oddly nice. I hope you get your three comments so you can update today! :)
    April 17th, 2011 at 12:37am
  • xxblackxxrosesxx

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    i think harlow and thatcher would be cute together =3
    April 16th, 2011 at 06:58pm
  • AhWhit!

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    Hmmmm.....now I'm really curious as to what John wants from Harlow. Giiirrrll, you need to update soon. I'm dying here!!!
    April 16th, 2011 at 06:49am
  • two sided heart

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    i love the story so far... i can't wait to see what happens between john and Harlow. update soon :)
    April 16th, 2011 at 04:33am
  • Fall From Grace

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    I love this story!
    Everything about it so far is amazing.
    Update soon! <3
    April 15th, 2011 at 08:11pm
  • allison wonderland

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    All in all I think that this is a creative story. The plot line is solid, it's decent and is being told from a good perspective. The idea is not totally original, but not overplayed either, which is a good thing, and works in your advantage. I did see a couple errors that were minor, a couple of missing places of punctuation, but details, details. I like this and you should definitely keep writing more! :)
    April 14th, 2011 at 07:29am
  • imXstillXfalling6

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    loving this rewrite
    April 13th, 2011 at 09:31pm
  • takeiteasy

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    wow this is really good!
    post more.
    and why is John such a dick?!
    April 13th, 2011 at 04:57pm
  • SweetPea

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    The Deja Vu I had is gone! Lol.
    John is a dickface:)
    April 13th, 2011 at 03:52pm
  • SweetPea

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    Deja Vu re-reading that! Lol
    April 2nd, 2011 at 09:49am
  • It's Just Bones

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    I can't believe you have grizzly bear, bloc party, dirty projectors, and Vu on here :) good taste gurrlll!
    March 29th, 2011 at 04:15am
  • asyousleep;

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    I really really REALLY hate thatcher! I feel like he manipulates Harlow and purposely guilts her into being with him and if he was really a good friend, he'd understand that Harlow is with John and he should back off. John had every right to punch Thatcher because Thatch was egging him on and purposely getting under Johns skin. Harlow should most definetly pick John!
    September 6th, 2010 at 04:50am
  • la dispute.

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    Well shit.
    I feel so bad for Thatcher, because he's in such a horrible position.
    I don't blame Harlow for not giving into Thatcher's words,
    Because she's also stuck in a horrible position.
    At least she gave Thatcher some sort of hope.
    September 5th, 2010 at 05:30am
  • leaveyouhigh

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    I am glad you updated because I've been thinking about this story a lot(:
    Thatcher and Harlow are just best friends for me
    so for whatever reason I am still on John's side, even if he's acting the way he is.
    I want them to work everything out, and be happily together.
    It's obvious that Harlow really likes John, and I think he likes her too.
    I can't wait for more.
    update soon?(:
    September 4th, 2010 at 06:31pm
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