i seriously love this story so much. it's amazing. i always kind of wanted to know what would have happened if harry hadn't killed voldemort..and it's pretty cool that a bunch of kids are the ones practically taking him on. great job! keep up the awesomeness! :D
first, just let me say: Oh hell yeah!. A great idea, combined with fine writing, interesting plot and a lot of imagination... First off, I just wanna say, that even if I loved the story, the fact that Harry was killed in your version takes away from the values of all HarryPotter-related things. He was created to be a saviour, to be someone that defeats the undefeatable, the one that accomplishes the impossible, simply The One. On the other hand, I do understand that if Harry Potter wouldn't be dead, there would be nothing of this story. So I'll get over the fact that he is dead. And enjoy your awesome story. Oh and Hermione dies at the begginning. That, for some weird reason saddens me most. But... still, love everything you did around the chapters. So, bottom line, I really did love your writing, the idea of the story, and so on. Am I feeling the love between Kerry and Klaus? I only got to read the first 5 chapters. But I'm so subscribing!
Thank you all! I'm glad you enjoy them so much. I had fun writing this story -- the chapters just come to me, and I write them down as quickly as I think of me, and I just hope it all flows and makes sense, though; sometimes I seem to get off track, haha.
Hmmm... now, where have I heard a name simular to that before? Honestly... It reminds me of some English actor I used to like...
Must be my over-active imagination XD or the fact Orlando is based on Orlando.
I love it when you update- the chapters are a real treat to read. They're nice and long- just how I like all my stories! Plus it means I have to keep my short attention span in check..
i like the way you write.giving us enough to satisfied the dying urge of wat will happen next,but still not revealing it.kudos 2 u!anyways.... I wonder what the necklace does? update when u can.
I love the way you intricly described everything that had happened since Harry's death, and all the characteristics of the children. Also, I love how the main character is the daughter of two lesser characters (Luna isn't that lesser, but Colin is).
Well, this was just the beginning/introduction, so I think it is the longest of all of my parts -- but I try to make all of the parts at least four pages long. I hope that isn't a problem for you, haha.
that was a loooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnngggggggggg chapter! i mean looooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnggggggggggggg!but it was really good! update more soon plz!*subscribes*