Elven Chronicles Book 1: Into the Shadows - Comments

I really like this story and I've only read a few chapters so far. I like the way you write, but I think the "flow" of your writing could improve a little. I'm not sure if that makes sense. I guess what I mean is some of your sentences seem sort of choppy and abrupt to me. But other than that it's really, really very good. :)

hey i just read the hole story. it was really good. lol. the writing itself culdve used a little work, but the story was amazing. i think im going 2 read the next rite now. or at least very soon.

a little work on spelling or which words you're using and a better idea of where the story is heading and you have an excellent story written. So far I love what Ive read so far!

awsome! thanks i'll definately include some more in future chapters

daang , that was amazing ! maybe alittle more description would have been nice though :)