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  • legacy .

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    Puck = ♥ Hot smexy guy ♥
    I really do love him tehe

    I'm not sure how I feel about Puck and Quinn, but I'm just glad she's not with Finn cause he needs to be with Rachel.

    Normally, I don't like it when writers include the lyrics into stories, but I like the way you've done it, describing the emotions and actions of the two at the same time. It's a nice change : )
    June 15th, 2010 at 11:17pm
  • peter quill.

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    I’m not a huge Glee fan, but this was brilliant.
    I really enjoyed it, it was well written and the ending was executed perfectly. It was so sweet and its made me feel all awww inside.
    May 2nd, 2010 at 02:55am
  • lee lee black.

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    Alice!

    I really need to keep betters tabs on you so I don't almost miss things like this ever.
    That was quite the one-shot.
    It was sweet, it had great build-up, and the ending delivered - it was beautiful.

    If you have the formula for writing this well every time, can I borrow it? (:
    May 2nd, 2010 at 02:21am
  • roe.

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    JDLSJAFLDJALFJALFJSAFA. Yes, all I can say is yes.
    I loved this, I really did. I love the ending too, it was perfect.
    May 1st, 2010 at 11:12pm
  • charley.

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    ^ Puck's real name is Noah. Puck is just a nickname. Cute

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    Anyways, this was wonderful. You're a great writer!
    May 1st, 2010 at 10:20pm
  • iluvzya6558

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    at the end it says, "I love you noah". Shouldn't it be: "I love you puck?" just wondering. hahaha
    May 1st, 2010 at 08:58pm