Love Among the Pizza Boxes - Comments

LAAAAANNNNNCCCCEEEE! wait...I think I need a brief recap. Who's this jerk, again? I would totally go back and find the chapter he was in but...there's 99 to choose from...no matter! I will go back and read parts again anyway!

And how cute was Shayla thinking about Riku all the time? Awwwww those two!!

So...I know you guys already have a banner, but I was in a banner-making mood, so here you go! Hopefully you like it <3

Aw, I was looking forward to Shayla's point of view. Oh well, this new chick sounds interesting. BUT! I would like to announce that I didn't like Lance from the moment he didn't really remember the parrot. Hmm...50 bucks says Lance tries something baaaaaad. Will Riku save her? Or will their stories stay separate? Hmmm....update soon, please! OH! And look at my new signature! Isn't it awesome and totally pluggy?

Yay! I was just about to comment asking for you guys for an update ^^
This line had me laughing:
“Hey Shay,” I say as I break out into a smile.
Virginity scampers her way over to the front door and her tail goes a million miles an hour.
Shayla’s face lights up and she throws her arms around my shoulders. “Riku!”
It was so....ironic verging on symbolic that the minute he sees Shay his Virginity scampers off. Was that on purpose?

And the ending was so adorable! And then Ginny came along, lololol. Update soon, please!

Who likes this story enough to comment multiple times? Oh! Me! Pick me!

Anyways, I'm starting to wonder why Shay hangs out with Zermine anymore. Zermine's great in her own crazy way but she also seems like more of a pain than a friend at this point. Of course, she did help Shay after that night with Lance, but still...

I love the new characters though :) I never thought I'd think fondly about a 400 lb French drag queen, lol.

Yay! I just finished all 96 chapters. The whipped cream? Frikken hysterical! Maybe it's just me but I have a feeling that the rating for this story should be R instead of PG13

Lololol. I wasn't going to comment until I read everything updated so far, but I guess I'll just have to comment multiple times. The couple is so CUUUUUUUTE! and I knew, I just knew there was a virginity joke in there. I love how awkward they are in the beginning and the way the chapters are set up is genius. At first I was like 96 chapters? But since each chapter is relatively short, it's cool. GAH! love it <3

I'm lovin' it ;D

^_^ Loving it ;)

as allways i loved this chapter!

THANK YOU! so much for the new chapter!! i cannot wait until the next one! yippie! lol sorry i probably shouldnt have had that frosty.....

sorry i avnt commented in a little while. im lovin this story! keep writing please! ill be waitin.

I am definitely in love with this story! I love how cute, and dorky it is with a nice blend of innocent romance! I also love how you wove some things in there from Kingdom Hearts (favourite games of all time, except Final Fantasy X)

Can't wait for more chapters!!!!

awsome chapter FINALLY!!!

i lurve it!

i love it! cant wait for the next update! when im reading this story it reminds me of an old gramma with her soap opreas lol

<33 keep updating!

Looooooooooveee itttt!

aaah rly good and shayla is an awesome name ;) and not just cause it's mine... :)

Love this. Love Kingdom Hearts!:D Haha, never thought I see a story like this.