Get Out Alive - Comments

Awesome start, I'm definately looking forward to seeing where it goes, the characters seem interesting :) update soon

Interesting start. I'm wondering how you're going to make it progress and all though. Though something I did notice that kind of bothered me were that some of the paragraph breaks were only one return instead of two keeping the paragraphs close together which made it a little hard to read, but otherwise, it was something I think I could keep reading.