Don't Remember You - Comments

I know you say you're ignoring this because of lack of motivation and writer's block, so I decided to help...

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Oh my gosh, I love this already! (:
Luke's personality is adorable! I love how he actually wants to get to know Teagen.
The layout is very nice, I love the whole atmosphere of it. [Does that make sense?]
One thing though, the chapters could be a bit longer.
But, other than that; it was great! (:
Like I said before, you have a lot of potential, and are a great writer! (:

OH SHIT.

Look at you, on an updating spree! I'm loving it!
And, Luke is so cute, being all excited to get his girl's number!
But, she's an ESPN intern?
I'm not quite sure if that's a good or bad thing yet, haha!
More soon!

Aha, I love it. :D
At least she's not a total mystery! And an intern for ESPN?
Squid just hit the jackpot.

I have no clue who these people are. I guess that's a good thing, so I can just imagine who they are. (:

I like it. The description, and plot are good. I like the banner, and layout. (:

Dang, that would suck. Waking up after losing your virginity and not even remembering it. D:
Plus the nickname Squid is great. <3
And the dude being asleep at the bottom of the stairs is pretty grand.
Anyway, your writing is fabulous. I love it. I can't wait to read more of this. <3

Love this!
& updates! haha :D

Woot! Updates! :D
YAY FOR SUMMER! :DD
Update. Nao.

Mmm, I like this. :D
Your plot line isn't a boring cliche- it's really nice.

I can't wait for more :D

Wow, that was not as awkward and embarrassing for the two of them as I expected.
And, I like that they exchanged numbers!
Can't wait to see when these two meet up again!

This has an unique plot with cute characters, one thing you might want to consider is longer chapters. I love the banner an the layout, and overall, this has the beginning of a great story. Please continue.

I love this story! Update soon!

Wow this is just outstanding! I love it!
Keep up the updates because I want more!!
Hmmmmm.... I wonder if that could be our little one-night-stand-ee.... Haha I hope we see more of Ms. Auburn Hair, I think she's a cutie!
I can run in heels! It's like, my only talent in life. Haha
Update soon? I'm subscribing!

I loved the update! I love how they don't recognize each other, I can't wait until they recall that they slept together! More soon please!

Okay, so they do kinda, sorta, somewhat remember each other. Okay, not really, but they have an inkling that they've met each other before, haha!
I can't wait until they realize that they've slept together!
I seriously love this story and can't wait for more!

I can't even look at heels without falling over.
My mom can run/jump/dance/sleep in heels.
>.>
Luke is a cutie. :D

First off, I really enjoy the narration of this. It flows well, and it feels like Luke is actually telling me the story himself.

I'm really intrigued by this story, and I feel like you starting it with a "scandal" was a really wise decision. Although I would have liked to see some sort of interaction with the girl.

Content and grammar-wise, this is great. While I'm not familiar with the fandom, I still think this is a great story and I hope you'll stick with it.

Update soon?