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  • Loor

    Loor (100)

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    So sad. All the time you had me wonder who she was talking to. I had my money on just a voice in her head, like a schizophrenic. I felt bad for her, but this is so much more sad!
    I enjoy the writing style you use. Descriptive can sometimes make a story drag, but you have found the perfect balance.
    Well done!
    May 23rd, 2010 at 12:16am
  • Be Wonderful

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    I liked it. At first I was wondering who the heck is she talking to But the title of the story and the ending clear that up. It was pretty good. =)
    May 3rd, 2010 at 04:54pm
  • Zacky Baker.

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    Even though it's for a contest you should write more to this story :DDD
    I really like it .
    May 2nd, 2010 at 05:04pm
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