i think i read this a long time ago; if i did, i can't believe i forgot to comment! well, yeah. that was one heck of a hot scene. i love how detailed and descriptive it was. ;) and i think it was really poetic; it had a good pace, lovely metaphors (like the part about ryan being an artisan/musician/choreographer), etc. idk. i just love your writing style. :3 err, i know you wrote this a long time ago and you're probably not active on mibba nowadays, but yeah. i figured i'd comment anyway. x]
well, yeah. that was one heck of a hot scene. i love how detailed and descriptive it was. ;)
and i think it was really poetic; it had a good pace, lovely metaphors (like the part about ryan being an artisan/musician/choreographer), etc. idk. i just love your writing style. :3
err, i know you wrote this a long time ago and you're probably not active on mibba nowadays, but yeah. i figured i'd comment anyway. x]