This is really well written and gives you a great look at Azael as a person... the concept behind the story is intriguing as well, and the details you included were gripping. Good job :)
Ooh, hello there, Mr. Bad Boy ;D Azael is such an amazing character! Wow! You did a lovely job capturing his personality (: I love his devil-may-care attitude and - okay, I have to stop before I start rambling. You have amazing talent, girl. I really love this! Bravo! Good luck, hun, and thanks for entering :D <3