Mad World - Comments

This seems pretty darn interesting.
I thought it was a zombie story. Vampire didn't even cross my mind. xD
The banner totally creeped me out, but the layout was gorgeous.
It sounded like the guy wanted to eat Lilac. Yum? xD
Anyways, good job. I liked it (:

That thing in the picture,was just like...wah.

You know what! Vampires are cool! okaaaayzzzzz. XD

This was fantastic. the emotions in it were just...*shudders* unimaginable.

Great great job,

This is not a story about vampires.

That actually didn't cross my mind once.

This was so eerie and dark. I loved it. It was almost pre-apocalypse. Man had gone so low as to feed on other humans?

I love how you write. You keep us waiting for what will happen at the very end and when it comes, it's just a great climax. Love it!

I'm loving that man at the end. The picture really suited the story, and the layout along with the font was beautiful. The first paragraph intrigued me, and the last sentence made me shiver. This could do really well as a chaptered story...but, oh well, right?

You should continue this.
Or maybe you shouldn't. I don't know, it was fantastic either way. Seriously, the writing is awesome as is the plot. You really did leave me wondering about the unanswered questions. I suppose that's part of the beauty of it....but I'd still love to know. Nevertheless, it was written beautifully and I enjoyed it so much!

This was brilliant.
The banner scared me. 0.0 Overall the layout is lovely.
I really like the idea of this story.
You wrote everything so well, I felt like I was there. :|
But you should totally continue with it and I'm happy it's not a vamp story xD
Great job, I'm subbing. <3

Wow, I love the mysteriousness yet the expectations that are brought about once I read the ending. It makes me want to read more.

Oh, and I'm glad this isn't another vampire story :3

i want this like woahh

This is really intriguing. I need to more, now.
Your writing is still as beautiful as ever. <3 This was written, very well.
This is original, like your other stories, and I adore that!
Continue, please? <3
Wonderful job! [:

This was really good. Very well-written.
It has a lot of detail and really just gets you lost in the world that you've created.
The ending really draws you in, makes you want more.

That picture scares me just so you know.
The layout is beautiful.
And I adore the concept of your story.
The plot line is beautiful as is the writing.
I honestly wish you to continue this.

Mad World. I totally thought of Halo the moment I saw that. >.<

"This time the damage was inflicted by Man's own hand." That was my favorite line.

Whta I like most about this, is the fact that most of what you wrote is true.

You did a good job, and very leering ending.

Good job!

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Whoa! Creepy ending! And the layout is awesome!

I can't wait to see how this story unfolds. Are you going to be writing anymore today?

COOOOOL! But I do wonder what's with that guy. o.o

Also, I love that episode of Twilight Zone you were talking about. I loved the name of it, but I can't remember it now. Something about time I think. Like how at the end he was like, "It's not fair! There was time now!" Poor guy. :'(