I Would Love to Take You There - Comments

I actually likes this one, it has potential, so use it! Don't stop here. I don't know but I actually get a different feeling about Anthony compared to other readers. Personally I think that Anthony is just fucking up with Illia's mind, and haven't they noticed the way he teases her? Gosh! We would think he is a sweetheart at first sight! Anthony is hell of a Character. I love him. You can see through him if you read this more than once.
Keep Writing! Don't waste this great plot.

soooooooooooo sweet!!!!!!!!! UR an amazin' writer, U know that?

i Love it! and thnaks for reading my story :3
i subscribed haha :DD
I ABSOLUTLEY LOVE IT!!

Very well written.

I must say that you made me cry. I could really feel her pain. I understand why she didn't want to tell Anthony. Anthony seems like a sweatheart. I think this is a very beautiful one shot, and I would like to know what happens next. So, if you made this into a story, could you let me know? I'd like to read it.

This was a wonderful story and thanks for entering and following all the rules.

I'm very sorry that I couldn't read this sooner! :)