The Truth or Lies, It's the Same Pain - Comments

I like this story so far. Except for a few spelling errors, i don't really have any 'constructive criticism'. XD

This was really good - I love the concept of this, but there were a few spelling errors that could be easily fixed (: That's all the "constructive criticism" I have really. I love the girls' relationship, even though Anna lied to Ami. This was really great (: Thanks so much for entering and good luck! <3