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  • DarkSilence

    DarkSilence (100)

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    I like this story so far. Except for a few spelling errors, i don't really have any 'constructive criticism'. XD
    May 6th, 2010 at 02:13am
  • alexander bernadotte

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    This was really good - I love the concept of this, but there were a few spelling errors that could be easily fixed (: That's all the "constructive criticism" I have really. I love the girls' relationship, even though Anna lied to Ami. This was really great (: Thanks so much for entering and good luck! <3
    May 3rd, 2010 at 11:43am
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