April 21st, 2015 at 07:44am
No Strings Attached, Please? - Comments
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I really like this story, it has a lot of potential and I like your developing of the characters but some of the grammar and spelling is off. I read part of the story, one chapter of it, and I liked it and will go back to reading it. I have a question, is English your first language? I might have missed this disclaimer somewhere, if no, then you did a really good job at forming words and sentences. I quite enjoy the layout and the colours you've used. I will keep reading (:April 21st, 2015 at 05:14am
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woops, double postApril 21st, 2015 at 05:14am
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please update soo i wanna know how it endsFebruary 5th, 2013 at 12:58am
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Comment swap!
I'm glad I found this story, first I'm gonna start with the usual. The layout is brilliant, the summary I thought for a little long and gave away stuff about the story I'd rather discover whist reading. but thats just me. Spelling and gramar: couldn't find anything to really discuss. I love your use of short paragraphs it really irks me when they're bunched up. As for the story, I love that's its incredibly unique but the concept of a known slutty girl at school is present. You haven't made it cliche or anything which I thank you for, cliche bugs me. I'm lookling forward to reading more. =)October 24th, 2012 at 12:20am -
I just found this yesterday & im already caught up because I couldnt put my phhone down once I began :) I really love this story alot :) I hope there is another update soon!!!!October 14th, 2012 at 06:59pm
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Updateeee pleaseeeSeptember 16th, 2012 at 06:04am
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I love it. I would love to be a proof reader, I corrected alot of it in my head while reading.... is this American English or Brittish English? because some of it was really confusing, message me and such :)July 24th, 2012 at 07:04am
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I love it! Poor Nate :'(... Please update soonJuly 23rd, 2012 at 09:37pm
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Oh god. Somehow I feel like Lynn's going to die. I don't even know why. Oh, that rhymed. lol. Can I be a proofreader? :DJuly 22nd, 2012 at 05:23am
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I hope Cam and his friends go to jail for that! Poor Nat... =( Update soon ^.^July 21st, 2012 at 10:21pm
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Kaaaaaaaaak, this is great. Ugh, what's wrong with that Cam Garretson guy? He would've been reported for KDRT if he keep on doing that thing when he's married in the future -_- Heheh, srsly though, a guy with 'Cameron' as his name was usually sweet and cute and..adorable *what* hahaha. Oh and I volunteer to be your proof reader :3July 21st, 2012 at 05:46pm
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Pllleeaasse update soon I miss you and this story!!July 14th, 2012 at 11:17pm
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Hello i have been following this story for ages now and i really, really love it. I'm just wondering if i could post it in my favourited stories section and of course your wondeful author's name and a link to your profile? Thankyou xMay 21st, 2012 at 06:05pm
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Love it <3April 1st, 2012 at 02:27pm
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Oh wow <3 i love this story!!! *-* fuck, Nat is so dreamy!!March 26th, 2012 at 03:46am
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I can't wait for her answer! They deserve a happy ending after all! Update soon. =DMarch 24th, 2012 at 07:41pm
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hmm ya im hoping for a happy endingMarch 24th, 2012 at 04:46pm
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You're updating!!! :D I'm beyond happy now to read the latest chapter. I can't wait to see the next chapter, and how things will go with Nat and Sav... And Carl with Farrah! Hahah.March 24th, 2012 at 01:20pm
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Your story is so great that I don't understand why people unsubscribe! When I read the new chapters I always think it was worth the wait and with chapter 28, it was really worth it! =D And after Nat told Sav how he felt she just left... ='( I can't wait for the next update! ^.^January 9th, 2012 at 08:49am
Oh my I'm so sorry, English isn't my first language. Sorry for the grammar and spelling, I've tried with Betas but some parts are still weird. I get that a lot, when people read my stories they always say the same thing about grammar and spelling. Thank you for reading this story, I hope you enjoy it and someday I could finish this :)