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  • LL Poivre

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    Oh my I'm so sorry, English isn't my first language. Sorry for the grammar and spelling, I've tried with Betas but some parts are still weird. I get that a lot, when people read my stories they always say the same thing about grammar and spelling. Thank you for reading this story, I hope you enjoy it and someday I could finish this :)
    April 21st, 2015 at 07:44am
  • noro

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    I really like this story, it has a lot of potential and I like your developing of the characters but some of the grammar and spelling is off. I read part of the story, one chapter of it, and I liked it and will go back to reading it. I have a question, is English your first language? I might have missed this disclaimer somewhere, if no, then you did a really good job at forming words and sentences. I quite enjoy the layout and the colours you've used. I will keep reading (:
    April 21st, 2015 at 05:14am
  • noro

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    woops, double post
    April 21st, 2015 at 05:14am
  • missqtpie97

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    please update soo i wanna know how it ends Sad
    February 5th, 2013 at 12:58am
  • marshallomnipotence

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    Comment swap!
    I'm glad I found this story, first I'm gonna start with the usual. The layout is brilliant, the summary I thought for a little long and gave away stuff about the story I'd rather discover whist reading. but thats just me. Spelling and gramar: couldn't find anything to really discuss. I love your use of short paragraphs it really irks me when they're bunched up. As for the story, I love that's its incredibly unique but the concept of a known slutty girl at school is present. You haven't made it cliche or anything which I thank you for, cliche bugs me. I'm lookling forward to reading more. =)
    October 24th, 2012 at 12:20am
  • Robbi the Ripper

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    I just found this yesterday & im already caught up because I couldnt put my phhone down once I began :) I really love this story alot :) I hope there is another update soon!!!!
    October 14th, 2012 at 06:59pm
  • CatSizzle

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    Updateeee pleaseee
    September 16th, 2012 at 06:04am
  • MerciPorLeVenin

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    I love it. I would love to be a proof reader, I corrected alot of it in my head while reading.... is this American English or Brittish English? because some of it was really confusing, message me and such :)
    July 24th, 2012 at 07:04am
  • CatSizzle

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    I love it! Poor Nate :'(... Please update soon
    July 23rd, 2012 at 09:37pm
  • sombersleep

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    Oh god. Somehow I feel like Lynn's going to die. I don't even know why. Oh, that rhymed. lol. Can I be a proofreader? :D
    July 22nd, 2012 at 05:23am
  • akanevampire19

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    I hope Cam and his friends go to jail for that! Poor Nat... =( Update soon ^.^
    July 21st, 2012 at 10:21pm
  • arumdp

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    Kaaaaaaaaak, this is great. Ugh, what's wrong with that Cam Garretson guy? He would've been reported for KDRT if he keep on doing that thing when he's married in the future -_- Heheh, srsly though, a guy with 'Cameron' as his name was usually sweet and cute and..adorable *what* hahaha. Oh and I volunteer to be your proof reader :3
    July 21st, 2012 at 05:46pm
  • Sugarplum_19

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    Pllleeaasse update soon I miss you and this story!!
    July 14th, 2012 at 11:17pm
  • SweetDreams.

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    Hello i have been following this story for ages now and i really, really love it. I'm just wondering if i could post it in my favourited stories section and of course your wondeful author's name and a link to your profile? Thankyou x
    May 21st, 2012 at 06:05pm
  • Felicia_Selina

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    Love it <3
    April 1st, 2012 at 02:27pm
  • FlyingBirdd.

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    Oh wow <3 i love this story!!! *-* fuck, Nat is so dreamy!!
    March 26th, 2012 at 03:46am
  • akanevampire19

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    I can't wait for her answer! They deserve a happy ending after all! Update soon. =D
    March 24th, 2012 at 07:41pm
  • Tofindme

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    hmm ya im hoping for a happy ending
    March 24th, 2012 at 04:46pm
  • arumdp

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    You're updating!!! :D I'm beyond happy now to read the latest chapter. I can't wait to see the next chapter, and how things will go with Nat and Sav... And Carl with Farrah! Hahah.
    March 24th, 2012 at 01:20pm
  • akanevampire19

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    Your story is so great that I don't understand why people unsubscribe! When I read the new chapters I always think it was worth the wait and with chapter 28, it was really worth it! =D And after Nat told Sav how he felt she just left... ='( I can't wait for the next update! ^.^
    January 9th, 2012 at 08:49am