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  • EverMonroe

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    Even though I like the story and I have nothing against Travis im a bit disappointed that Alex isn't one of the main characters and that the beautiful love from The Rollercoaster Life is dead. I mean, I was hoping that what Holden told Alex would come out and they could work things out.... After all, she was going to forgive him....*sight* :'(
    Sorry I just love Alex....
    April 25th, 2011 at 04:22am
  • EverMonroe

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    The Roller Coaster Life, best story I've EVER read!
    It made me cry, laugh, I got every feeling I can possibly think of so I really hope this sequel its just as amazing and that Alex is in it cause you didn't put him in the characters page and that really worried me but im pretty sure he'll be in it...i hope.
    April 25th, 2011 at 03:17am
  • doyleangel

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    Hello!! Great sequel. I'm conflicted on who I want her to end up with in the end, cause I love them both. Onto the third installment!
    September 16th, 2010 at 06:43pm
  • ksm013

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    I loved your story so so so (I can say 'so' as many times as I can:>) much. You write so well. :D

    For some weird reason I prefer Travis with Jency than Alex.

    Please do continue to write:D
    September 15th, 2010 at 01:39pm
  • erratic

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    The way you ended this story was perfect.
    Jency finally talked to Alex about their break up, and it looks like they're finally not on ridiculously awkward terms with each other. In addition to that, Travis knows about her past, admitted that Smile Kid is an album she inspired, AND said that he's in love with her. It was a great balance of conclusive and open-ended parts.

    Now that this is over, I'm absolutely stoked for Painting Flowers.
    I'm subscribed and anxious to see what will unfold during Bamboozle Roadshow.
    :)
    August 9th, 2010 at 11:46pm
  • BeggingForChanges

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    <3

    ALEX AND JENCY NEED TO HAVE BABIES.
    August 8th, 2010 at 10:49pm
  • EVERLONG

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    team travisssss!!!!!

    can't wait to read the final chapter in this installment!! and then the sequal!!! siiick!

    :)
    August 8th, 2010 at 03:45pm
  • AnaTheInsane

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    Poor Travis! He made everyone think Jency was pregnant. That realy made me laugh. Great chapter as usual!
    God, the tension between Jency and Alex is so intense. Can't to see what happens when she tells Travis!
    August 3rd, 2010 at 05:08am
  • erratic

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    Oh man.
    It was hilarious that everyone thought Jency was pregnant. I still can't believe that Travis couldn't remember what happened AND actually kicked Alex in the balls. That was music to my ears.

    Holy cannoli, was the conversation between Alex and Jency awkward. It was almost painful to read because it was so charged with emotion. Although he tried to hide it, it was ridiculously obvious that Alex still has feelings for Jen. Even though the way he broke up with her was a series of terrible events, I couldn't help but feel bad for him.

    I know this is redundant by now, but this was a wonderfully written chapter and I can't wait to read how it ends/how the sequel begins.
    August 1st, 2010 at 09:36pm
  • BabyTarantula;

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    Team travis! :D

    I really want jency to stay with travis...They make a good couple!
    August 1st, 2010 at 05:09am
  • snippers

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    Ahahaha. I like how when Jency told Jack to get her boyfriend, he grabbed Alex. :) Very smooth. I forsee unfortunate drama resulting from Travis's unfortunate outburst.
    July 29th, 2010 at 11:13pm
  • erratic

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    Never has a boy seemed so endearing while drunk as when I was reading Travis's conversation with Jency. Even inebriated he just seems so charming. In contrast, the dialogue between Alex and Jency was almost painful to read. It was like I could hear them ripping open old scabs.

    Holden and Maggie are going to be parents!!!
    First they get engaged, now they find out that they're going to have a baby?
    Touring seems to have done wonders for their relationship :)

    On another note, The Rollercoater Life tagging along for Bamboozle Roadshow should be quite interesting, considering which bands headlined that tour...

    As always, I'm eager to read more.
    July 29th, 2010 at 04:15pm
  • BeggingForChanges

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    AHAHAHAH!

    Jack gave the phone to Alex. He wants Alex and Jency to have babies, too.

    And Travis isn't gonna be a father. Jency's pregnant with Alex's babies.

    ::D

    Travis's exclaimation is gonna cause some drama!!
    July 29th, 2010 at 04:33am
  • Bones;

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    "I'M GOING TO BE A FATHER!"
    Haha, made the chapter.
    I personally loved this chapter, it was one of my favorites.
    I like how Jack gave Alex the phone when she said 'boyfriend,"
    Great chapter.
    July 29th, 2010 at 04:20am
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    "I'M GOING TO BE A FATHER!"
    Haha, made the chapter.
    I personally loved this chapter, it was one of my favorites.
    I like how Jack gave Alex the phone when she said 'boyfriend,"
    July 29th, 2010 at 04:19am
  • gardetoncoeur

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    I loved it, update soon!(:
    July 29th, 2010 at 02:12am
  • BeggingForChanges

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    Oh hey, sexy time on the beach.

    But you know, Jency and Alex gots to have them some babies.

    And THERAPY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Woot. ::D
    July 28th, 2010 at 08:49pm
  • erratic

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    Hot damn.
    The sexual tension between Travis and Jency could be cut with a plastic spoon.
    Lovin on the beach sounds fantastic. (I just hope that sand doesn't get all up in their business.)

    As usual, this was a delight to read, and I can't wait to see what you have in store.
    July 28th, 2010 at 06:53pm
  • BabyTarantula;

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    jency and travis should make babies.

    update!
    July 18th, 2010 at 08:49am
  • BeggingForChanges

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    Oh. And she should return Alex's book. Then they can makes babies.
    July 14th, 2010 at 05:46pm