Shooting Stars - Comments

@And I'm On Fire

No problem! I'm glad you enjoyed it, as it's terribly old. Thank you so much for kind words!

Thanks for the link. I really loved this! It had a great flow to it :D

@paranoid android.

Thanks so much for the feedback(:
Yes, they were typos; my word programme didnt detect them I guess

~I'm judging for this contest~

First: the rules. The link was there, thank you very much:) The layout was nice and neat, with only a few grammatical errors (I assumed they were typos):
"..the popularity or BMTH was skyrocketing."

The writing was really good. It flowed well and was just an easy read. A comforting one. It was like I could be the main character quite easily. Your descriptions were very nice, one of my favorites being of the 'peppy' waitress, whom I can too easily picture:
"A waitress came up to their table after they had been seated to take their orders. "My name is Amber and I will be your waitress for the night, what may I serve you two?" She asked in an extremely peppy voice."

Well done!
Remember to keep checking the contest page for the results.

@park chanyeol

I know ): I hated to kill him off because I LOVE him, but I needed some drama! Haha thanks :D

That was so sad!! Poor Oli =(
But, I'm excited to read the rest on account of Zack being so sweet ^-^