California Storms - Comments

I think this is the saddes thing I have ever read :(
Very good <3

So...beautiful. :')
Something about that story just touched my heart <3

oh, wow...
that was amazing.
i can't even begin to describe how great that was. x.x
i loved every bit of it.

good luck in those contests - i'm sure you'll win. :3

This was soooo very cute and so very sad. It reminded me of the music video for All These Things I Hate by Bullet for My Valentine. So freaking sadddd. But I enjoyed it so much.
Thanks sooo much for entering this in my contest.
I'll let you know when the judging period is over and the winners are announced.

-Cries-
I....really liked this.
Like...a lot.
It was really said, and sweet<3
You did a really good job(:
I'm glad it wasn't all clichéd.
I get tired of those<3
Anwaysss.
Good luck<3
xo

Oh my god. This was so heartbreaking and so incredibly sweet all at the same time.
I loved how you set it up at the beginning, with things being kind of vague and then as the story progresses we [the readers] discover what actually happened.
I always like a little mystery in my stories.
I absolutely adored their kiss scene. It was so cute.
At the end, when Vince was going to get groceries, I was basically shouting at the screen "NO! Don't go!"
I just knew you were gonna kill him off, and the way you wrote it was simply lovely.
Your spelling and grammar were impeccable, which I liked a lot.
And you set this story in California, where I live. It makes me happy.

Thanks for entering my contest! Good luck :D

That was really amazing! It was perfectly structured : )

Oh my god. This is so beautiful and yet so sad! You write very well, you captured moments perfectly. Don't let anyone tell you this isn't a good story; they'd be lying.
Lol, as a matter of fact, we have a storm going on right now.