Devon's Lullabye - Comments

I don't know, i personally don't like this. For one i couldn't read it unless i set it to the default stage, many people will just click back to find something else. Two, the chapters are really short and really confusing. I'm not trying to sound like a bitch, im just one opinion really, but those are just my thoughts on this. The only thing i agree with is that the 'christian lady' needs to mind her own damn buisness, lol

Whoa, I like it and I'm not just saying that. You're writing is simple and easy to read. It really makes you feel the character's want for Devon. I like it. The picture drew me in :) The text color was hard to read but ta-da I used the default layout!! I like it and I'll subscribe!

I really like the plot of this story, it does reflect the song that you chose (: To answer your comment on my profile, the wordcount is fine. It just had to be 500 words, it doesn't matter if you've got less than that on the different chapters. There were a lot of grammatical errors, especially with your and you're, which sort of took away from the story itself. But overall I really did like it! Thanks for entering :)

hahaha! comment virginity is mine!!! anyway... this is a really good looking story. You had me at the picture! I will subscribe! I really like what I read!