It Isn't Just Skin Deep. - Comments

So, I think you should update this, because it's amazing, and I think it deserves another chapter sometime soon. ♥

"Rodney, what the hell is wrong with you?"

"What do you mean?"

"You're hideous."

i loved that xD

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Well that was rather rude of him. You don't just blurt out that you think some one is hideous, that's just mean. Hmm, I wonder how Rodney got that scar. Hope to find out soon! <3

This is really interesting. Its like Gavin is leaving in a world of un-mechanical robots; if that makes sense. I am super excited to see were this goes. I am going to subscribe.

I really really like this. You write really well, as always. M'dear. <3

Ohhhh, I'm so excited.
This is beautiful, in that amazing-writing-style-keeps-you-wanting- kind of way.

A society that promotes anorexia; now that is messed up. Can't wait to see where he finds himself. Hope to find out soon! <3

This story is great. I love it. Great job, you're an amazing writer and I like this one so I'm going to go and read more of your work!! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!!

After reading the summary, I was instantly hooked. I relate to it already, so I know I'm going to be a fan. A big, big fan.

I feel absolutely petrified for Gavin on his eighteenth birthday. The word surgery sounds so frightening, and the way you've written the emotion in this so far is spot on. In my opinion, this is the start of a phenomenal story and I could certainly see someone being interested in publishing it already.

It's a wonderful, dramatic metaphor for the pressures many people feel today to be perfect, to look perfect all the time. Well, it's not even really a metaphor; it's more like the "normal", natural anxieties many have about perfection and how to achieve it put under a microscope and intensified.

Anyway, I'm hooked, which means I'm subscribing and looking forward to each and every chapter to come.

I love this idea. I have to ask, have you read Uglies by Scott Westerfeld? Because the main idea of perfection is similar to that of Uglies. If you haven't then you definitely should. Hope there's more soon! <3

*subscribes*

Short, but amazing nonetheless!

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Anyway, Bestie, wow, you are an amazing writer, and I'm looking forward to this joint story, so much.
Keep up the good work, my love!