Dude, I love this. I really do. But how could Lucy refuse alcohol from Vince? I'm talking about Vince. I would take anything that man gave me. xD Either way, it's amazing so far. Keep writing it! PS I love Tommy in this one. He's like, epic child molester. In a good way, though.
Dammit, I wouldn't have guessed that.
I still love it to death.
Keep writing, small child! <3