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  • Bob Dylan.

    Bob Dylan. (115)

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    This was a REALLY good short story! I really enjoyed it!

    However I did notice a few mistakes... "Clara arrived at Clara’s side in time to rescue her from the awkward situation." doesn't really make sense?

    But this was a very well written story and I wish there would be more! D: Welldone.
    June 5th, 2010 at 10:07pm
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