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This made me cry so hard. Like my m got all worried and shit, but this is beautiful. You should do another one like this.

~LeFro

This made me cry so hard. Like my m got all worried and shit, but this is beautiful. You should do another one like this.

~LeFro

I'm crying but your a fucking amazing author you know that, right? You should.

I'm crying but your a fucking amazing author you know that, right? You should.

My cousin told me to read this, so I did...
By the end of the third chapter I was practically crying.
You're a really good writer, you know that?
This is definitely one I'll save a re-read a bunch of times.

Purely magnificent. .thats for sure. .you make me bawling my eyes out on this again. .
this earthquake really hits home to my face, i cringe while reading this. .its the most scariest thing to experience. .And you perfectly describe being trapped in it. .Not only that you trapped the most gorgeous man in that story. .Its true that you let all you guard down when you are in this tragically event. .You really do make me cry. .It's like i can picture them in the trapped room all blooded and clung to each other. .Great way to end the tragic event to a very romantic death. .I'm officially amaze by you. .

So they both died together... (i think)...
Tragic... yet somehow very calm and almost happy...

you're one of the best writer's I've ever had the pleasure to find and read the stories of.

I love yoooouu...

xoxoxox

Oh. My. God.
Cried so hard I think I cracked a rib. Omg I need to get a hold on myself! The screens all blurry!
That one was almost as sad as 'Postcards from no man's land' (Don't even got me started on that one mate).
I'll be crying for hours now! Look what you did!
I loved it. So much.

'Kay, so I just read the whole thing and WOW. I have never cried at a fic before, but I can honestly say I am tearing up. I loved it becuase it was sad but at the same time happy and peacful. Totally amazing.

I'm speechless. That was amazing. You're an amazing writer. This short story was really well written, and it captured, like, everything you could possibly capture. I really cried while reading this, especially at the middle of Chapter Four.
This is one of those stories where you can't listen to sad songs, because it'll just throw you over board, and make you cry. I've learned from experience. And that last sentence just made me cry even more.
You did an amazing job with this story. This story has to be one of the best stories I've ever read on Mibba.

I just found this on someone's profile and read it all. I'm bawling now.
I don't think I've ever read something as amazing as this. It's so powerful in all the right ways.

Our secret hearts are fading away in the distance, carrying us home, as the hotel door finally bursts open two seconds, five minutes, six hours, and three years too late.

That is what had me crying. It was just so amazingly powerful. There are so many lines in this that stuck out to me, the clock ticking, then laughing, and finally wishipering.

Tick tock, the clock whispers. Siren song, closer and closer, a menacing tune.
That's just perfect.

I'm not going to do a million of them, though you deserve it. I have never really, truly cried at a story, but this one made me do it.

This is so amazing, I just don't know what else to say. I loved it to bits and have every intention of linking it on my profile.

rrrrraaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr.
youre amazing.
and inventive and creative and brilliant and insightful and intelligent and talented and about a hundred other adjectives i cant think of right now.
i really loved this.

indulgence.:

these kinds of stories make you think.
of your life, and to, seize the day, should I say.
and I love this story, because it's been a real eye opener for me.
our writing is amazing, its just beautiful. everytime it makes my skin crawl and my heart beat faster.
oh em gee.
that last line was perfect, absolute perfection in my eyes.
"...as the hotel door finally bursts open two seconds, five minutes, six hours, and three years too late."
wow, that was the part that really got the tears streaming.
probably the most beautiful story i've ever read.

I knew it was going to end because I was reading in on a convo you were having. XD

edit; page claim.

its kinda ironic no? during the last two chapters...Seize The Day came on shuffle...and sent me over the edge...i think that someone was out to get me. yeah, i've got to agree with everything that was said above...

anyways...this was a very morbidly beautiful fic...though i have to say i'm very sad for mikey, toro, and bob... :( they just lost two band members...two brothers...(meh, they probably considered frank to be a sibling...) and...yeah...its a very heart wrenching but so incredibly beautiful story...thanks for posting.

((on another note...page claim...))

OHMYGOD . . . . . I just read the whole thing and cried!!!!! Seriously I'm not one to cry but that make me cry in front of my Dad and he was like "what the heck are you crying at?" Congrats that was really well written xxx

you cant end it there
you cant you cant you cant you cant you cant you cant you cant you cant
cause they have to live!!
they have to but but but but but but but but
why??
why end it there and make me cry more?
hmmm *hits you with large hammer*woops *says sorry* rolls eyes *i just like happy endings...

libby

You know, you've probably had the latest chapter up for a while, but I wouldn't really know, cause I procrastinate too much and I hardly read anymore.
But this year (I guess) I need to read like never before.
But, you already know what I think about your writing.
At least, partly :]].
Have you ever thought about writing lyrics, or anything?
Maybe you already do, but, like this;;

Of course not, honey. What's so funny about death?

That is engraved in my mind.
I'm not sure why, really.
But it's just, there.
I was thinking about if your stories were movies [I mean, isn't that how most people picture stories anyways?]
But, yeah, I was thinking about them in movies, and it would be really perfect.
Your stories would be the best movies, ever.
No doubt.
Other then that..You made me cry with the last chapter or two (:
Very touching and emotional and all of the above.
I loved this story, like never before.
Ended in a couple long chapters, but well worth it.
Short, sweet, and to the point. =]

LGFUAD, JJ<3.

Fuck. Just...fuck. Ya know, it's funny, cuz those times apply to someone I know as well...odd, huh? Anyway, I loved it, as always. Pure poetry in prose form. Like silent music, eh? Anyway, you rock and such. I'm sleepy, though, so this is like the crappiest comment ever. Slaters Fink. Heehee, what'd you do to get that name?

Oh my god. That was really, really, really, really sad. I thought Gerard wasn't going to die... but then again, someone had to die. Sad. :(

Poor Frank. He loved him all along...

And then right when Mikey was there, he had to... :(

Amazing. I really, really love this story to death. Oh no, death. :(

You are amazing.

very tragic. that's the only fault it has.

but other than that, it was incredibly ,amazingly good. I love all your stories but this ones one of the most insperational and mindblowing.

thanx for taking your time to write these.

THIS IS ONE OF THE MOST AMAZING THINGS I'VE EVER READ - fanfic or not! You've left me totally speechless and utterly in awe. You've made death seem so beautiful even though it's gruesomly visceral and so final - I love how you've described the afterlife. *wipes away tears*