My jaw was dropped the whole time i read it, no kidding. IT WAS SEXY. 8D *applauds* Like my first comment said, chapter two was awesome. You didn't disappoint. =D Write more!
That was awesome!!!! I can't wait for the next chapters! You better make them hot! xD (knows something they all don't and hence, feels special) It was beautifully written and I didn't click the [x] button on its tab! A job well done. =D