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  • loveleycliquet

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    OHHHHH...
    why the fuck is miarko helping Brian and Zachy get her back?
    anyway love it
    July 15th, 2010 at 04:16am
  • secrets-that-die

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    awe, i want bell to be back with syn
    can't wait for more
    <33
    July 14th, 2010 at 10:49pm
  • perfectionist326

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    IDT Brian knows what he's getting himself into.
    You know her being a Princess and all.
    IDT they will take to kindly to have their Princess being taken away...again.
    update soon plz :]
    July 14th, 2010 at 04:18pm
  • Somehow.Saving.You

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    Aw I want Bell to go back and be with Syn D=
    but i love it anyway
    xXx
    July 14th, 2010 at 12:13pm
  • Queen of the Clouds

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    aaaahhh!!! i want to know what happens next!!! the chase is already intense. i'm glad they are soul mates - i guess it's a definite happy ending for their relationship :) nice update - more soon?
    July 14th, 2010 at 12:02pm
  • violetriddle

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    hahaha you accidently posted two of the same chapter silly silly person but that's okay I still like you
    July 12th, 2010 at 09:36pm
  • melodramaticfool-101

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    awesome update!!!! me want more...... 0_o
    July 12th, 2010 at 11:57am
  • PoeticMess.

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    It was great but like xxSawa said, it's up twice!
    July 12th, 2010 at 10:26am
  • xxSawa

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    awesome update
    but you updated the same chapter twice :'D
    July 12th, 2010 at 09:15am
  • Somehow.Saving.You

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    Loved it! It brilliant! I wonder how Syn's gonna react when he finds out about her leaving...Cant wait for more
    xXx
    July 12th, 2010 at 08:13am
  • Queen of the Clouds

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    there's 2 chapters the same.... but i liked the update and i'm glad she's decided to run away and i can't wait to find out what syn does about it, and if she actually manages to escape :) more soon!
    July 12th, 2010 at 08:02am
  • Musicfanatic

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    AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! update!!!! please love it.
    totally amazin, update soon??
    July 12th, 2010 at 04:49am
  • Musicfanatic

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    AHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! update!!!! please love it.
    totally amazin, update soon??
    July 12th, 2010 at 04:49am
  • Queen of the Clouds

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    nice update. i like the idea ker0sener0mance has about syn figuring out things through his dreams, like maybe how she's planning to escape and then he stops her. even if it is only him just overhearing the spirit form of a lycan talking, he could still like secretly figure out she's trying to escape from him, so he could start being romantic or something to get her to stay. i dunno. it just might make a cool chapter when she plans to escape, then goes to bed to find it covered in rose petals by syn or something like that. hope i helped...
    July 10th, 2010 at 12:45am
  • violetriddle

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    Have you not noticed that most writers are girls on here??? Oh and I keep thinking that they will get caught by the band... And also... maybe... most likely... I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!! Your a good writer!... well then... ummmm.... bye!
    July 9th, 2010 at 04:32am
  • secrets-that-die

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    Lovin it! She's falling for him
    Can't wait for more
    <33
    July 9th, 2010 at 03:09am
  • Ker0seneR0mance

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    Hmm What should you do in the next chapter? I think the idea of sysn slowly figuring things out in his dreams is a good way to start. Maybe a rescue attempt or some sort of betrayal. Maybe the princess should be a bit more fiesty and aggressive and try to escape.
    July 8th, 2010 at 09:14pm
  • PoeticMess.

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    I like this.
    There are quite a bit of spelling errors but it's a good plot.
    July 8th, 2010 at 11:50am
  • Queen of the Clouds

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    another great update! :) you're still keeping me interested, which is hard to do lol
    Synyster, by far :)
    July 1st, 2010 at 09:22pm
  • No Brakes; No Mercy

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    Great chapter! M. Shadows is definitely the hottest of all of them. lol
    June 29th, 2010 at 09:42pm